Wednesday, February 4, 2009

(my computer froze and didnt let me finish here are number 8 and 9.)

8. Write your Denouncement. The end of the story would be when you find out its the girl who was friends with all of the victims, and at first seemed to be torn up and hurt by their disappearances, but when a deeper look is taken, you seen that she was always envious adn jealous of the girls because she knew she could never achieve their popularity and "success" in what seemed to be the most important things of life: cars, money, parties, boys, and clothes.

9. Conclusion. The detective would be thanked by the police department as well as the town, and the police would apologize for not listening to him when he first came to them with his suspicioms and clues. Afterward he would not have any firther adventures, but would end with his nosy eye peering out his window over town.

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